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This is the third story in the Victoria set. I was asked to up the eroticism a little more, so i have and i hope i have found a good level. In this story Victoria Innocently tries to take up some keep fit and ends up in a naughty sticky situation
so far the set consists of
Part 1 Stuff it
Part 2 A tight squeeze
Part 3 Work it
so far the set consists of
Part 1 Stuff it
Part 2 A tight squeeze
Part 3 Work it
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Oh no, working out! That is never a good idea, boo hiss! And fans for the win! Were you writing this during the heat wave by any chance? 
Okay, sports bras and cleavage? What are sports bras designed to do again? Good luck getting cleavage in one, or at the very least being able to see it, they tend to cover over that area completely. The way you describe her belly does seem so very cute though! I like how you included her finding the instructor annoying, I don't think there is a single work out DVD out there where the instructor is any better than tolerable! Hehe, that is cute about her finding a pretty woman on the DVD to stare at, I think we have all been there! I remember my mum's aerobics DVD in the 90s had four women and one guy who was blatantly there as fanservice! I love the little details like her chuckling about beating the instructor as well, for some reason things like that really add to the whole overall scene for me. It is nice to get a look at her in the mirror as well, I know that sometimes writers start talking about their characters self perception as though they have magically gained a 3rd person of themselves and that always kinda ruins it for me! The thought of her heart visibly beating is a bit of fan disservice for me though, that sounds gross. xD The phrase workout warriors made me laugh so much! I love it! I have to say that I doubt she'd find a 45 minute work out fun though no matter how many pretty girls she has to stare at on the DVD, anything more than 10-15 mins of aerobics tends to be the absolute limit for us normal people! And again, there is no way that even I, as a reasonably fit woman, could do two hours of that. And hour is more likely. And that is certainly an interesting use for an exercise ball! And oooh, do I see a set up for a sequel in the making there?
Okay, sports bras and cleavage? What are sports bras designed to do again? Good luck getting cleavage in one, or at the very least being able to see it, they tend to cover over that area completely. The way you describe her belly does seem so very cute though! I like how you included her finding the instructor annoying, I don't think there is a single work out DVD out there where the instructor is any better than tolerable! Hehe, that is cute about her finding a pretty woman on the DVD to stare at, I think we have all been there! I remember my mum's aerobics DVD in the 90s had four women and one guy who was blatantly there as fanservice! I love the little details like her chuckling about beating the instructor as well, for some reason things like that really add to the whole overall scene for me. It is nice to get a look at her in the mirror as well, I know that sometimes writers start talking about their characters self perception as though they have magically gained a 3rd person of themselves and that always kinda ruins it for me! The thought of her heart visibly beating is a bit of fan disservice for me though, that sounds gross. xD The phrase workout warriors made me laugh so much! I love it! I have to say that I doubt she'd find a 45 minute work out fun though no matter how many pretty girls she has to stare at on the DVD, anything more than 10-15 mins of aerobics tends to be the absolute limit for us normal people! And again, there is no way that even I, as a reasonably fit woman, could do two hours of that. And hour is more likely. And that is certainly an interesting use for an exercise ball! And oooh, do I see a set up for a sequel in the making there?